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There are a few things that I like about this image, I like the pun in the title, it was not intended when I named it, and I only later discovered its presence... just a bit slow. But the exposure of the grain stocks in this way was created by cutting against the grain.

I also like that the rules have been broken on this one in a number of key areas specifically related to centring, yet it still works.

There are elements of hard and soft realities represented in this image.

The hard reality is represented by the ground represented and the wheat. The soft reality is represented by the clouds and sky.

The heart shape created in the sky, corresponds to the rough diamond shape created by the grain. Both of these elements, hard and soft are necessary for life. Diamonds and hearts have always been associated with love and affection. Diamonds are a hard reality of the earth, while hearts are a soft reality of emotion. There is in our lives a love relationship not only between persons, but also between the earth and man. The earth is not just the element that holds us up, but through its production it stains us and gives us life The same can be said of relationships of the heart. They strengthen us, they hold us up especially in the difficult times and they give us life. Even though they cannot be observed like the diamond, the grain or the earth they are as real. Both of these elements are represented and demonstrated within this image.

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:iconkironaoftheskies:
The first thing I have to say is that I am thoroughly impressed by this image. The contrast between the harsh linear quality of the grain and the soft, more abstract quality of the sky is striking and highly effective. The exposure is great, as well as the color...a lot of artists on this site would probably have chosen to blast out the contrast, make the sky unnaturally bright, or to ominously darken the sky, but the natural balances you achieved here are fantastic. It's striking in and of itself, which (in my opinion) is the way it SHOULD be. Some may comment negatively on the half-and-half composition choice...while I will admit that my first reaction was skeptical, I think it was an effective choice, and you made it work well for you...all the more evidence to your skill! All in all, fantastic work--thanks for sharing! =)
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:iconkvinorum:
Well done and spotted here, very interesting to see the grains so straight against the beautiful clouds

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:iconawjay:
all rules are there to be broken...

superb image

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:iconanonymous-art:
Very effective image - love the composition and the sharpness of the foreground. I think that the fact that the grain is partially cut, along with the lines leading away give the eye some focus, which is usually why middle horizon lines usually don't work well. Great capture!
:iconthaumadzo:
I rarely use the centre of an image in my work. I have however seen this rule broken quite effectively by a couple of artists. It seemed to me in this situation breaking the rule would create an effect that no other process could do. I am quite happy with the results, but I doubt that I will throw away basic human psychology any time soon.

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:iconthaumadzo:
this is becoming more evident out here as the grain is combined directly more and more often. I spoke with some farmers about it, and they confirmed that with current drying methods, the grain does not need to be swathed and allowed to dry before it is combined.

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:iconthaumadzo:
only when appropriate.

In my mind, the rules are based upon sound human psychology (Well, it is not just in my mind, it is fact). Breaking them in any indiscriminate way will ruin an otherwise good image. Just look around dA and you will see thousands of examples, but not very many where the rules have been broken effectively and the image works. For some reason I think this one does, but I don't plan to throw the rules out.... they are a good guide to making images that are attractive.

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:iconthaumadzo:
thanks Dave

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:iconwchild:
Ahh.. Harvest time. So familiar to me. In my childhood home town there used to be more cows than humans..
:iconstarlightspoint7:
Beautiful shot! I love the symmetry. :)

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